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The profession that I choose to pursue is physical therapy. Physical therapist are often placed in postions, in where a lot of moral and ethical decisions must be made throughout their career. Many studies have shown that the profession of physical therapy, has espanded their roles as well as their profession and reponsibility making it a very critical profession.
Some of the the legal decisions that I predict that I鈥檒l face in my profession is dealing with templations in the sexual harassment area. Among pateints. For example, a patient could accuse me of illegally harassing them in a way in which they felt violated. This can be a very serious matter in my profession. In order for me to justify my charge, whether or not I harassed my patient, I would have to videotape each session to prevent false charges of sexual harasssment. In that case I鈥檇 have to obtain video cassettes so that I鈥檇 have some kind of evidence to prove my point.

Fix your punctuation, use proper grammar and edit your spelling mistakes.

Very good sounding and nice vocabulary. I'm guessing you are in highschool, if so, then you are quite intelligent.

The essay doesn't really flow. If you are answering questions from a book or sheet, I can tell. If not, then you need to make sure it doesn't sound that way. Try to make the sentances flow by doing a converting sentance. If that doesn't work, try to divide it into paragraphs and add more details. The first setence should be catchy, and it doesn't sound that way. Try re-wording something like this:
I have always been interested in physical therapy. I have chosen to persue this interest by becoming a physical therapist.

see what I mean?

MeLanie gave you a good answer. Break it into at least 2 paragraphs as suggested and run the spell check. If you need a little more, it's a very physically demanding profession that requires lifting people or helping people to rise who can not get up alone, but can move with assistance when they are helped to arise.
Your point about sexual harassment is valid, but you should expand on that. You cannot avoid touching persons near the breasts or buttocks when assisting them. This is not sexual harassment, however. It is more likely to be inappropriate touching. I'd add that another way to deal with that is to warn the person that to assist them you will have to touch them in an area of the body that would be inappropriate for a person you was not in the medical profession. So-there's another paragraph for you.

You will get in a lot of trouble if you videotape your sessions if the patients are partially or totally unclothed and expecting privacy. Many states have laws that prohibit the hidden videotaping of persons who are in such situations where they reasonably expect not to be videotaped or photographed.