Once upon a time in a low populated neighborhood in Antarctica it was a very quiet and safe place.
All the people were friendly. There were hardly any crimes ever but they鈥檙e was sheriffs patrolling the neighborhoods and around it was late December. It was very cold it was always cold snow covered the ground all the time everyone knew each other. It was just like any other place but hidden in the most unexpecting place the roads there are un seeable because of the snow.It was a very peacefull town it was almost like the town was too perfect there weren鈥檛 that many places to work but you didn鈥檛 have to pay bills, or house payments no house markets their elactricy was powered by solar energy and oil from a generator their was plenty of oil so they never run out ever. They weren鈥檛 trapped in this place the people their visited their family鈥檚 every year once a year for a month all at the same time. Because their was a time in the year where the sun goes out and its dark for a full month.
4 days till darkness month. Anne says鈥欌€?I cant believe it this year went by so quick鈥欌€?yes it did go bye quick but hey cant wait to see grandma and grandpa right says Marie (Anne鈥檚 mom.) ya I cant wait to see them but why cant we have Christmas at our house this year and have them come down here to see us say ann. Mary says consciously 鈥樷€榯hat is nonsense its to cold here 鈥樷€? Well I鈥檓 off to work ma says tom 鈥樷€檚on wait before you go can you pick up some groceries for me on your way back from work says Maria sure mom says tom and before Maria says goodbye the door is closed and Hes off he gets into his red Chevy pick up and he drives down to the police station to greet his friends and puts on his police uniform and his badge and hat from his locker. Tom is 22 a son of Maria and a brother to Anne. What inspired Tom to become a police officer is the disappearance of his father.
He stays on the case and act secretly as both a cop and a detective by going through the police reports files when everyone leaves the police station. Today he was caught going through the files without permission and was asked to leave why would they make me leave tom says鈥欌€?Ive been working as a police officer for 10 years I should at least be able to know what happened to my father鈥欌€?br>
1 days till darkness month. Tom walks in the house a day later quietly and then stumbles into his mom where have you been Have you been lurking around the files again like I told you before we don鈥檛 know what happened to your father says Maria. How did you know where I was and please mother if you no anything about it tell me I know you are lying you know what happened!!
Ok I should have told you along time ago Tom but you were to young and you wouldn鈥檛 understand
But now your getting older I got to tell you someday well 鈥︹€o you know how we leave every time of the month of December before darkness month we sent you and your sisters to your grandparent鈥檚 house and we stayed here to raise money for charity to send to the children in need. That day when the sun went down and these white paled people took your father and drag him off a cliff and he was buried in the snow and we never saw him again. Tom sighed and said鈥欌€?im staying here tomorrow hurry board a plane before they鈥檙e booked. Toms mother was shocked and broke out in tears she was worried for her son but believed he would make it and trusted him. The next day Toms mothers and sister Anne left to said goodbye to Tom and wished him luck and left to the airport They were the first their they grabbed their tickets and got into a plane a plane to California
Many others in Antartica were fleeing their homes to the airport. Its 6;30 pm the sun is going down.
Tom knew what he was going up against was not going to be easy to be defeat so he waited patiently he still saw some people left behind cooking in their houses or shoveling snow or fixing their trucks.
The sun is going down slowly Tom is ready for anything it is dark he goes inside and try to turn on the lights but they are not working know ones electricity was working. It seems like every second its getting darker and darker. Tom goes outside and then he sees a person on a roof with a black and red cape and he yells out to the person 鈥樷€?does your power work if so can you fix mine the figure turns around and glares at tom with its big red glowing eyes t swiftly fly鈥檚 towards Tom grabs him and Swings him into the air and he falls on his back he tries to get up but then a boot hits Tom in the head and he is defenseless he is carried away to castle into the far hills of Admiralty Hills he is putting in a jail cell. Lator on he escapes and runs into vampires which his mother was talking about
They鈥檙e are two of them he fights them. He first charges into one of them and it blocks his attacks quickly . he keeps fighting he doesn鈥檛 give up and so on loll
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So he finds a map in one of their pockets and goes to the cliff his father was pushed over. After 2 hours of frustrating looking he finds a cave and he walks through and he sees a man with a bear coat on he turns around and its his dad. They survive in the cave for a month and head back to the house and every1 is happy and this stories moral is that If you believe you can do it do it and you fail keep trying and trying to you do it . Creative at least! Honestly it REALLY needs "alittle" work... Sounds like a weird sci-fi movie though. It sounds like a play. You should get a friend to spell check it for you, and maybe help intertwine some of the details back into the beginning, because the beginning really sets up the story and should talk more about the vampires. | 